IELTS Writing Sample with Answer
نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس با پاسخ
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سوال رایتینگ تسک 2
Eating too much sugar is unhealthy for our health. Some people think that it is a government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
پاسخ به سوال
Having an excessive amount of sugar poses a threat to our health. Some believe that a government must be in charge of putting a restriction on sugar people have, yet, some others consider people in charge of their own consumption. I believe both individuals and people are responsible, but the government must use media and other ways to tackle the issue.
Nowadays, due to technological as well as scientific advances, humans have become more conscious of their body and mind. When it comes to our duty to taking care of ourselves, it depends where we live and how much educated we are. Having too much sugar leads to many health diseases such as diabetes. Individuals who are living in third world countries and are deprived of many facilities may not have the same health knowledge like the ones living in first world countries. Thus, the goverments in third world countries must raise people awareness about the dangers of having too much sugar.
There are diverse ways governments can contribute to raising people’s knowledge as to the dangers of having an excessive amount of sugar. I believe that prevention is more important than treatment. There must always be some centers around that offer free blood sugar test which can be of great help. Media whose impact is undeniably huge can include some programs where some doctors discuss the consequences of having too much sugar in entertaining ways. The last but not the least, governments can specify some budget to some local communities that are dealing with health to raise people’s knowledge about the consequences of eating unhealthily.
To conclude, governments in third world countries must take great responsibility to raise people’s awareness since people are not well-educated. There are various ways to educate people about eating unhealthily such as media and local communities. نمونه رایتینگ آیلتس با پاسخ